Changes made & Considered



-Chorus X2

-Shots with lyrics - Always Thinking Thinking, Hands are shaking shaking, Clock is ticking ticking, time to give in give in.

-REMEMBER to use the tripod for the shots of the clock.

-More shots of the character sitting round the house unaware of how to produce any ideas: Shots on the phone, attempting to call someone but with no answer- roughly 5 seconds?, clearer shots looking out of the window with elbows perched on the window sill instead of leaning on the table looking out of the patio door, shots sitting on the stairs head in hands, then a few more consisting of the character sitting on the floor against the wall, in the hallway maybe to portray a childish yet mature character to attract a younger audience?